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The rain pulses against my upturn face
My slick hair whips behind me
As a massive throng of people
Clad in black coats and black hats
Flanked by imposing steel monolith
Presses against me
Each face nondescript and blank
The rain draining their color
Turning them into a cadre of zombies
Cloaked in emptiness
And wreathed bitterness
Declaring their depression
At the ominous clouds
By embracing the ground
Brutally staring downward
As I throw my arms open
Inviting the downpour
To soak me to the bone
To flow off my face
Like molten silver
Conforming to the contours
Of my joyous smile
As it drenches me in cold happiness
I revel in the torrent of water
And vigorously embrace it
With all of my soul
My slick hair whips behind me
As a massive throng of people
Clad in black coats and black hats
Flanked by imposing steel monolith
Presses against me
Each face nondescript and blank
The rain draining their color
Turning them into a cadre of zombies
Cloaked in emptiness
And wreathed bitterness
Declaring their depression
At the ominous clouds
By embracing the ground
Brutally staring downward
As I throw my arms open
Inviting the downpour
To soak me to the bone
To flow off my face
Like molten silver
Conforming to the contours
Of my joyous smile
As it drenches me in cold happiness
I revel in the torrent of water
And vigorously embrace it
With all of my soul
Well just something I wrote today. It was raining, everyone was moaning but I liked it... heh..
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wow...you really have a way with words. i just love rainy days...i'll usually go outside and make an ass of myself, runnin around like some crazy freak...people think i'm lost or homeless the way i walk around in the rain o.o' ...but enough about me! great poem... *cookie for you*