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Disgusting Me
My eyes were adrift
But caught by the sight
Of his pathetic countenance
A disgusting visage
Of gargoyle like appearance
His face twists and distorts
Into that pretentious
Piss-colored and filth encrusted fake grin
And shivers of disgust rocket
Down my spine
My eyes lock with his
For the barest of moments
The dull sheen of blue
Purveying a sense of cowardice
And absolute lack of intelligence
But in that moment
That fleeting second past
I caught a glimmer
A slight glimpse
Of his tortured soul
A soul cursed with a pointless life
Numb from a tortuous past
Torn apart by present dilemmas
Stuck in a maelstrom of doubt
Of what the future may hold
And as a tear build in my eye
A rage burns in my heart
With an anger born of pity
And a rage born from apathy
I shatter my mirror with my fists
My eyes were adrift
But caught by the sight
Of his pathetic countenance
A disgusting visage
Of gargoyle like appearance
His face twists and distorts
Into that pretentious
Piss-colored and filth encrusted fake grin
And shivers of disgust rocket
Down my spine
My eyes lock with his
For the barest of moments
The dull sheen of blue
Purveying a sense of cowardice
And absolute lack of intelligence
But in that moment
That fleeting second past
I caught a glimmer
A slight glimpse
Of his tortured soul
A soul cursed with a pointless life
Numb from a tortuous past
Torn apart by present dilemmas
Stuck in a maelstrom of doubt
Of what the future may hold
And as a tear build in my eye
A rage burns in my heart
With an anger born of pity
And a rage born from apathy
I shatter my mirror with my fists
Well I guess I am kind of pleased with this... it isnt great, but it is. I kind of wanted to add a little more description, but bleh... who cares?
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wow....i have to agree with ~xneox This is flipping awsome....didn't expect that ending. In fact in the beginning it was quite bland, but it pulls you by the shoulders and smacks you in the face. Beautiful job with this. 
loved it...continues
Heather
loved it...continues Heather